Fantasy & romance editing services for authors ready to become the next big thing
You’ve poured your heart into every page, every line, every word.
Now, you’re eager to share your story with readers — but if questions like these are keeping you up at night…
Does my protagonist’s character arc feel natural, or does it seem rushed?
Did I miss a typo on page 74 that could pull readers out of the story?
Is my magic system consistent, or is it creating unintentional plot holes?
Did I accidentally mix up the names of those two minor side characters?
Will readers stay hooked, or will they DNF halfway through?
… then it’s time to partner with an editor who specializes in developmental and line editing services, and who truly understands and appreciates your genre.
EXPLORE SERVICES
HERE’S HOW WE CAN WORK TOGETHER TO WAVE A LITTLE EXTRA MAGIC INTO YOUR MANUSCRIPT
Your Fairy GodReader
Complete developmental & line editing service Starting at $1,000
Your story has the potential to sweep readers off their feet, transport them to extraordinary worlds, and leave them totally enchanted. But how do you get there from your first draft?
That’s where I step in. Think of me as your story’s fairy godmother, helping you to refine your manuscript into polished, publish-ready prose. Through a three-part developmental editing process, we’ll make sure your story casts a spell on readers, captivating from the very first page.
I’ll help you to…
View your story through the eyes of a reader: I’ll read through your story as your dream readers would, offering feedback on what’s most captivating (or confusing) about your narrative.
Elevate your manuscript with thoughtful developmental edits: Together, we’ll tighten plot twists, enrich character arcs, and build a seamless, compelling flow that publishers and readers alike will fall in love with.
Feel confident in your path forward: Like every good fairy godmother, I’ll leave you with a clear roadmap to your story’s happily-ever-after, so you’ll know exactly how to shape your book to reach its fullest potential.
Your Storysmith
Standalone developmental editing service Starting at $0.05/word
Your story has strong foundations, but some elements may need fine-tuning. If you’re asking yourself whether that plot twist works or if readers will love your characters enough to write fanfiction about them, then you’re ready for developmental editing.
I’ll journey through your manuscript to uncover areas where plot points can be tightened, characters can be deepened, and pacing can be perfected — all while staying true to your original vision.
I’ll help you to…
Patch up plot holes: We’ll close narrative gaps to keep readers fully immersed and ensure nothing shatters their enchantment with your story.
Deepen character arcs: I’ll guide you in crafting character journeys that are as magnetic as a love-at-first-sight moment and as thrilling as an epic quest.
Polish the pacing: Together, we’ll fine-tune the rhythm of your story, creating a flow that effortlessly carries your readers and makes your book impossible to put down.
Standalone line editing service Starting at $0.05/word
Your story is almost there, but is it fully publisher-ready? If your manuscript’s grammar, sentence structure, or spelling need a touch of fairy dust, I’m here to help.
Whether you’re hoping to self–publish or take the traditional route, I’ll help you refine every sentence to ensure your story reads like a well-crafted spell. Together, we’ll elevate your transitions, diversify your sentence structure, and clarify your prose — all while preserving your one-of-a-kind voice.
Your Magic Pen Polisher
I’ll help you to…
Banish errors: We’ll ensure your manuscript is polished and error-free, delivering a flawless final product that impresses agents, publishers, and readers of all kinds.
Upgrade your prose: I’ll help elevate your language and word choice so that every single word shines.
Sharpen clarity and flow: Together, we’ll refine your story to ensure that it flows seamlessly and that readers are never lost.
Questions?
Let me consult my crystal ball…
Not at all! My number one goal is to enhance your story — not change it. I’m here to preserve your voice and all the magic you’ve created while helping your manuscript reach its full potential.
What’s the difference between developmental editing and line editing?
Developmental editing focuses on plot, structure, pacing, characters, and worldbuilding — the big-picture story stuff.
Line editing hones in on the flow of language, sentence clarity, and voice.
In my Fairy GodReader service, you get both. Because great stories need strong bones and beautiful language.
Will your feedback be harsh?
Never cruel, always honest. I’m thoughtful, thorough, and deeply invested in helping you succeed. I’ll tell you what’s working, what’s not, and how to fix it — with a healthy dose of encouragement and zero ego. (Okay, maybe a little sugarcoating. I’m a Cancer, after all.)
Can I book you if I’m not writing fantasy or romance?
Maybe! If your project has strong character arcs, speculative or magical elements, or emotional resonance, I’d love to hear more. Reach out with details and we’ll see if it’s a good fit.
How far in advance should I book?
I typically book 1–2 months out, though I occasionally have sooner availability. If you're on a timeline, reach out early so we can plan accordingly.
Won’t I get an editor if I pursue traditional publishing?
Why should I invest in editing services?
I get it — hiring an editor is an investment, and there are no guarantees in publishing. But here’s the thing: when we work together, I’m not just helping you tweak a draft. I’m making sure your story has all the elements that leave readers hooked and publishers paying attention. Think of it as an investment not only in this book, but in your growth as a writer. You'll walk away with stronger craft, new tools, and more confidence in your voice.
Totally fair point! Editors do come with traditional publishing contracts — but only after a manuscript has made it through the slush pile. That means you have to stand out from page one. Working with me gives you a major advantage: a polished, professional-level manuscript that shows agents and publishers your story is ready for the spotlight.
What services do you offer?
Fairy GodReader – A full developmental and line edit
Mini Manuscript Critique – A critique of your first 5–10 pages
Stand alone Developmental
Stand alone Line Editing
Are you going to rewrite my story?
Do you offer payment plans?
Yes — for services over $500, I offer flexible payment plans to help make the investment more manageable. Just let me know what you need.
Will you help me get published?
While I don’t pitch agents or publishers, I do help get your manuscript submission-ready. I can guide you on next steps, whether you’re querying, self-publishing, or prepping for beta readers.
Why is it called Once Upon a Manuscript?
What kinds of writers do you work with?
I specialize in working with unpublished and self-published authors writing fantasy, romance, or romantasy. If you’re early in your writing journey or still figuring things out, you’re in the right place.
How long will this process take?
It depends on the project and service. Most projects are completed within a month, but I’ll confirm your specific timeline once I’ve reviewed your materials. And once we begin, I’ll keep you updated every step of the way, so you’re never left guessing.
What do I get with the Mini Manuscript Critique?
This service includes:
Big-picture feedback on your first 5–10 pages
Light in-line comments
A personalized action list
A Loom video walkthrough
A 30-minute consultation (recorded)
2 weeks of email follow-up support
Why pay for editing if I have beta readers or critique partners?
Beta readers are awesome — but I offer a professional perspective that’s structured, strategic, and rooted in both craft and market expectations. I’m not here to skim or praise. I’m here to help you level up your work with industry-aligned insights and deep editorial care.
Because every story has the potential to become a fairy tale — and I believe in the magic of turning your manuscript into something unforgettable.
WHAT TO EXPECT FROM OUR PARTNERHSIP
When we work together, you’re not handing your book off to someone who’s hunting for flaws. To me, editing isn’t about “fixing” a book — it’s about nurturing your story and shaping it into its most captivating, spellbinding form.
With me, you can breathe a sigh of relief knowing that you’re entrusting your story to someone who understands it, respects it, and is over-the-moon excited to help it shine.
If that sounds like the kind of partnership you’re looking for, let’s work together to bring your story to life!
